Eternal


Up she goes
Down she comes
She is moving hard
She is going slow

His eyes are closed
His fists are clinched
He cries a moan
He gives a groan

Her fingers are rolled
'Sit tight' he is told
Its hard as rod
She tightens her hold

Steady are his hips
She mums her lips
He feels the lick
She goes on quick

His breath is shut
As the volacano erupts
'Love you oh my babe'
'Love you too' she says!

53 comments:

The Lover said...

sexual!!!!

wildflower said...

hmmm...
Bolder..bolder..bolder..
i like the fineness with you put up something..like..like..THis!
it's not just the sex that you are trynna highlight...i guess...there is something more intense...deeper...worthwhile...isn't that so?

Soul of Dawn said...

wow...just what i need

kaylee said...

Oh I love it sounds like me sometimes:)

Anonymous said...

How am i???? Ummm would be happier if i didnt have chest pains all the time!!!!!!!

kaylee said...

That was me hahaha!

ConfusedFool said...

I mean we are moving from an rebel attitude to erotica? how does this come in?

disillussioned_me said...

that was fast! lolz...nice!

Shimmer said...

lol... u know u managed to put up sumthin sexual without makin it sound cheap n thts really gud! interestin poem...

cheers!

Kalyan said...

lovely sensuous words...you have crafted them beautifully...You could feel the motion...lovely!

Ab said...

hmm... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!

NEHA CHANDOK!!!!! said...

projection of thots without lettin the boundaries being crossed...

dats called ART...
u sound like an Elizabethan poet, which is appreciable....

+u have left it open for interpretations, which adds to it!
10/10...

awesome piece!!!

Jeevy said...

now thats what im talkin bout! :D
this is intense! ;)
very well written! :D hehe
is this based on an experience?? :>

peace & love
Jeevy

utopia said...

what was that all about? ;)
erotica written in a subtle manner.

Nithya N said...

wild.
"i love you" adds on like an unwanted mandatory though :)

shikha said...

ahem!!!ahem!!!!.....sweet....!!

jus 2 days left for CAT and i m here to read ur post...see how much i love u and ur blog!!!:-)

aww...now dunt start crying..:-)

DJ said...

wild erotica :))
good one...

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

WOW!!!

kanika said...

i have to agree with a comment here, totally mmmmmmmm. on second thoughts, tantric sex! and on second second thoughts, since when have u started dabbling in erotica?
nicely passionate :)

Soul of Dawn said...

I WANT MORE!

shikha said...

Heyy....I NEED UR PRAYERS BIG TIME...CAT went little weird..hav no clue how i performed...so prayers pls pls!!:)

Jeya Anand said...

hot!!:)

manisha said...

yaayyy...dats erotic!!!!!...

p.sp...based on true experience.... :P............sarryy foar introodeeng

manisha said...

DONE DONE...CHEK OUT MY POSTS!!

d SINNER!!! said...

u hav been tagged...tak it if u wanna

kaushiki said...

hey "stand by mind"...u have been tagged..to post 8 random facts abt urself...
do chck my blog for the tag..
i hope it will be fun...nd u will njoy...w8n for ur next post as well as the tag...
enjoy...

creativeness_at_its_low said...

another supa creation.....
by supercreative
man its really very sexy

upecmustang said...

if that aint a metaphor for some serious serious sex...i dnt kno what it is.. :p
rawk on...
cheers!

zahid said...

An intrepid post dude !!!
cheers!!!!

Adi Crazy said...

Ohmigod!
I thought I saw an intense love making scene, without any obscenity - which is rare. And I liked it. ;)
Cheers!

vitruvian said...

very direct....
very sexy...
this is good....
cheers!!

shikha said...

beta new post karo!!!:-)

DreamCatcher said...

Came here after long time...sorry bro..but what is this man..!!h e he got e stumped..and at this time (2:13 AM) at night..pretty like chocolate drink ;)

Standbymind said...

@ lover
is it? ;)

@wildflower
may be.. may be ...

@soul
glad u gat!

@kaylee
thats cool ;) haan!
ok that was U...lol

@confused
Just comes if from somewhere...thats what seems like to me;)

@_me
:)

@Shimmer
ty pal!!

@Kalyan
glad u could....;)

@Neha
ty ty..I am honoured !!!!

@jeevy
mmmmm....mmmm
mmmm! ;)

@utopia
Well what does it look like to ya?
......:)

@nithya
U always say things so damn beautifully!!!

@Shikha
aaaa aaaa uuu uuu..I am!!

@dj
ty man!

@raaji
yea yea!!


@kanika
Tantric sex...now thats cool!
Just started kanika...:)
ty!

@soul
U shall get it!!!
he he

@Jeya
mmmm yA!!

@Manisha
no no no! ;)

@sinner
okaay!

@kaushiki
ok :)

@low
ty man!!

@upec
cheeers man!!

@Zahid
ty ..cheers !!

@adi
Good goood....nice u liked it!

@Vitruvian
ty man!!!

swatimala said...

hey, visited your blog after a long time...and I must say it is a very well written piece...sensous without being cheap!

BlaH QueeN said...

Mystery breaks as one reads further...'Sex-eH' but not vulgar or cheap ;)

phoenix said...

breath takingly beautiful

Nitu Chiring said...

You have proved it, we can be sensuous without being vulgar. Visited for the first time. Loved it.

Irresistible Desires... said...

Vatsyayan ki Kama Sutra ka Naya preface..


haha..

Irresistible Desires... said...

Vatsyayan ki Kama Sutra ka Naya preface..


haha..

Rashi said...

Perfect display of unconventional love...

nice read !

MissyP said...

HOW WAS THE XPERIENECE? ;)

Still searching said...

like an old auntie, shaking my head side to side "tsk tsk.. yeh sab aaj kal ke bacche kya kar rahein hain!"! lol!

Ab said...

oh brother, where art thou!

Prude said...

BOLD.
Thats something! Not many would be dis easily...
Oddly for all the sexual emphasis...it was a clean read. Nice.

Nithya N said...

dude! where have you gone!!!!!!!!!

The Acid Tongue said...

saala tharky :P

how's you dude?

Gonecase said...

Very bold, neat write. I wrote something on same lines, some time back,though mine wasn't this popular, hehe. Read if you want to:
http://johanybravo.blogspot.com/2007/09/sex-amidst-ringtones.html

shikha said...

heyo...how r u ????no new posts!!:o

The Tentacles of Thought said...

Nice way to put it without soundin cheap.the last line was uneccessry tho.

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Indrajit said...

i believe this is damn crass stuff that u ahve belted out here..
M sorry if u are offended mate...
U cud haev expressed it more with more subtlety and may be add some imagery...
dont mind and wish u a hapy new yr.;_)

Solitaire said...

waah waah!