Eruption....

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The smoke in the front of his eyes was floating in the air.
The song playing was - Sexual Eruption by snoop dogg.
He half laid on the comfortable couch of the lounge club..The walls were painted black, and the steel raillings and staircase was shining brightly.On the low table in front of him, lay his wonder puff. He put his face down and inhaled it...
.
"I'm gonna take my time, she gon get hers before II'm gonna take it slow (woah woahh),......................."

Eyes closed....It travelled from the tunnel in his nose to his head..he could feel every millimetre of its movement....till it spread to his whole head....He kept his eyes closed..and slowly opened them...

" Sexual Eruptionnnn...Sexua..."

The smoke in front of him was floating smoothly, the things moved in a motion,...slow....The dj with his headphones on movin his head slowly....,the people moving on the floor slowly.....,
Bartender threw up the vodka bottle in the air...it went up slowly...,and stopped...and it reamined there....just in the mid air.....
Hands moved, Heads moved, Smoke floated, Music played on...The Bottle stayed in the air.....!

"She might be with him but shes thinkin 'bout me me meeeeeeee............................."

He reached for his glass on the table. He moved his hand...and it moved slowly......slowly it moved ahead......Slowly.....Finally it felt the cold glass surface.....He gulped in the liquid in one go....His eyes closed....and opened again slowly....

"We don't go to the mall, we don't go out to eat eat eeeaat...."


The eyes saw a naked thigh....it moved slowly.....the black silky cloth came over it but went away slowly....Coming down they saw a shining knee....brighter than the steel in the club....The flesh would turn blue, then green and sometimes white.....The eyes moved slowly....

"All that we ever do it play in the sheets sheets sheeeeeetss............."

His head went again for the powder.....sniffed...it travelled....to the head...
"I'm gonna take it slow (woah woahh), .............."

Eyes close...
Eyes open Slowly.....
Smoke didn't float, it was still in the air....
No bodies moved, they stayed still .....
Just one body moved.....
drapped in black silk...
It moved amongst the still world...
Thighs moved....
Black...
White.....

" Sexual Eruptioooonnn..."

Black white.....
Green...
Blue...
Black white...
Green...
Blue...

"If you don't know by now, Doggy Dogg is a freak freak freeeeaak...."

It moved Slow....Slow...Slow...


"Smoke us a cigarette and go back to sleep sleep sleeeeeep...."


Slow...owww..owwwww......
Slowwwww....
Slo....
Sl....o...
S...l.....w.....w................
Stop!
All black!!

"Sexual Eruption (A sexual eruption)
Sexual Eruption (woah, an orgasm)
Sexual Eruption ............."

20 comments:

Ab said...

dude, is it like you've been experimenting a lot these days????

or was that jus th words of th song u mentioned... anyways.... well, good that your writing atleast something :)

Sujoy Bhattacharjee said...

was that a personal experience....
Ah! but for the long arms of the law the world would have been a dreamier place.

swatimala said...

after a long time...and brilliantly written

Adroit said...

wowww...lambe samay baad but sahi post hai yaaaar...

Jeevy said...

Whats cookin brotha?
Thinkin bout sex too much eh?!
hehe! :D Happy New year btw!

-Jeevy

missyP said...

Smokin smokin.....drinkin drinkin...sniffin sniffin.......dreamin dreamin....lage raho lage raho.....

Standbymind said...

Sorry Everyone!!
Have been taken back by exams n then training...
back now!

Standbymind said...

@ Ab
Ya man..call it anything..but yeah I wrote something!

@Sujoy
U bet!

@Swatimala
ty swati :)

@Adroit
Lamba samay for sure!!

@Jeevy
Yeah YEah..
same to U!

@MissyP
Yeah lage hue haaain ;)

kaylee said...

great post :)

swatimala said...

grt hearing 4m u after such a long time...big hi 2 u 2...hope 2 c more posts from u in the future

shikha said...

I had to read ur post chup chup ke.cuz I am in office and dunt wanna give ideas to my co-workers...
imagine!!

yeah CAT went fine and now busy wid GD/PI!!will let u know if i get thru anywhere!

Rashi said...

I wud be honest this time...

really liked the comments on the post :)

I have the same kinda questions and doubts too, nyway...cool style of writing a complicated thought..

keep rockin' dude

Standbymind said...

@kaylee
ty kaylee!!!

@swati
U shall u shall ;) hehe!!

@shikha
haha..that mus ve been a scene!
Congrats!!!

@Rashi
Well I know...trying to capture
a mind here!!

Cyberkitty said...

After such a long time. Zinda hain?? Kya hua, kuch badle se likh rahe hain?

Standbymind said...

@cyberkitty
Na na..its my Atma re...
thats why changed changed everything
;)

gunj said...

awesomely animated!!

starry nights said...

Thanks for stopping by my blog and I do hope you stop by again.

manisha said...

yeah...evryones teling u--thnkun bout sex..:P....mnmnmn... actually sensuous...ahem ahem...me wants tor ead pratigya....open nly to readers!!!!!! ???

Standbymind said...

@gunj
ty :)

@starry
I will!

@Manisha
Well..happens at times.. you know!
and ya that is only for members!

Kim said...

Ok that was something man!Nice!