I was always up on my guard
I kept for last my best card
I always felt short by one yard...
They said cover it yard by yard
Keep for the last your best card
Always stay up on your guard
Son! You always gotta try Hard...
Why was I denied the last yard
Why wasn't it best, My last card
When I did fall off my guard
No! - Now I will not try Hard...!
I will not try hard...
I will not try hard....
14 comments:
poignant...
@swati
where r u ?????
amazing!!
Thought Provoking..
you dont have to... :P
u already rock... :D
somehow, this sounds optimistic too!!! havent seen such optimism in pessimism;)
@karan
ty buddy
@green
:)
@humbl
LoL..thanx
@Manisha
is it?
How..please explain...
maybe because of the repeated "will" i n it...like u say i WILL do it, u here are stressing upon u wont! hope m clear:(
Rocking! Just loved it! Its not going out of my mind! Really amazing! What a blend of words!
Interesting! Haven't read anything like this one since a long time!
(:
Trying haRD has become a bane for me these days, as I am getting lazier with each passing day.. Sigh ...
But nicely written and I just finished it out in a breeze, in one breath.. easy flowing and subtle.
Tc.
Its been a while since I've been here. Your blog has shaped up well. I'm blogrolling you for my readers.
Regards,
Jay
http://www.judeunleashed.blogspot.com/
thats' something !
such a subtle way of giving up.
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